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Silver Affair

I lay my affair before me
among the oak table
The yearning within falls
like a sheet of rain

I want to touch my affair
let it kiss my flesh to silence
the burn within the river of
nightmares

My affair stares at me
yearning to fill me like a
passionate moment , when a
drug addict shoots/snorts their
choice of drug .

To fill me with sexual
thrills and silence the burn
within my nightmare

My affair screams for my
touch , my relief

My affair once stole love
from me as this affair
over took me with surprise

I lay my affair before me
among the oak table
and with a final word
whispered aloud is

" fair well , my silver cold
affair ,we part on old terms and times"

For my affair was nothing
more then a razor blade

by bex

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Rather mellowing I think, especially at the end with the mention of a razorblade. Just a note Bex, we're not like RYL so you don't need to label threads triggering or so, because I think other people might look at the title an think that (possible triggering) was part of the title of the poem. But overall, I like it. Kudos.

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thank you , Woody

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