Rather mellowing I think, especially at the end with the mention of a razorblade. Just a note Bex, we're not like RYL so you don't need to label threads triggering or so, because I think other people might look at the title an think that (possible triggering) was part of the title of the poem. But overall, I like it. Kudos.
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God Bless Us Everyone We are a broken people living under a loaded gun
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